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Haunted by ~JillValentine44:iconJillValentine44:

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Haunted

I知 haunted by your memories
What you used to be
I知 haunted by your fallacies
What you meant to me

I知 haunted by your presence
Lost reality
I知 haunted by your essence
What I used to see

I知 haunted by existence
Haunted by the tears
All of my persistence
Worthless over years

I知 haunted by resemblance
Haunted by the fear
What used to be remembrance
Whispers in my ear

I知 haunted by the feeling
That won稚 go away
I haunted by concealing
Things I値l never say

So every time I see you
Walking in the hall
Your casual smile cuts through
It just takes it all

I guess you値l never know now
Guess you値l never see
How I知 always haunted
By what can never be
©2004-2010 ~JillValentine44
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Author's Comments

This is just a poem I wrote while crushing on a certain guy... Can't say who, though... Most people know who he is... but... anyway... I hardly ever write peotry so this is a rare find. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it!

EDIT: I had to fix two lines cuz they didnt make sense! Tip: Keep your tenses in sync!! ^ ^

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~sailorchip Sep 2, 2004, 11:14:11 AM
Wow I like it! *chuckles* i guess u don't do "peotry" often but your poetry isn't bad!

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"Don't worry! This is all for the sake of Justice!!"
"Where's the justice in this??"
"Oh I'm sure it's around here somewhere!"
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~JillValentine44 Sep 3, 2004, 2:31:43 PM
Oh, bugger!! I wrote peotry! Dang. Oh, well. You get what I mean. Anyway, thanks for the comment! Yay! Peotry is hard to write! Hahaha.

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:flirty:JillValentine44:flirty:

:skullbones:

"What about Jack?! I can't leave without him!" "ARRRGHHHHH!!" "...Never mind, let's go!" -Will, POTC: DMC

"I was nothing more than an almost innocent bystander..." -Jack, POTC: DMC

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~SapphireIce Sep 4, 2004, 2:14:46 PM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! 'Tis the haunted poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
You KKNNOOWW how much I loooooooove this poem!
THUMBS UPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"He sounds exactly like Moody," said Harry quietly, tucking the letter away again inside his robes. "'Constant vigilance!' You'd think I walk around with my eyes shut, banging off the walls...." !!!!! Gotta love Harry! :boogie: :penguin: :coffeecup:
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~JillValentine44 Sep 5, 2004, 11:26:55 AM
"Thank ya kindly!" (--David, Resident Evil Outbreak)

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:flirty:JillValentine44:flirty:

:skullbones:

"What about Jack?! I can't leave without him!" "ARRRGHHHHH!!" "...Never mind, let's go!" -Will, POTC: DMC

"I was nothing more than an almost innocent bystander..." -Jack, POTC: DMC

:skullbones:
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~SapphireIce Oct 7, 2004, 7:58:14 PM
You soooooooooooooooooooooooo NEED to submit that to Submerged! People will LOOOOOOOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :D :D :) :)

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"He sounds exactly like Moody," said Harry quietly, tucking the letter away again inside his robes. "'Constant vigilance!' You'd think I walk around with my eyes shut, banging off the walls...." !!!!! Gotta love Harry! :boogie: :penguin: :coffeecup:
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~JillValentine44 Oct 7, 2004, 8:13:24 PM
I am going to! :D

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:flirty:JillValentine44:flirty:

:skullbones:

"What about Jack?! I can't leave without him!" "ARRRGHHHHH!!" "...Never mind, let's go!" -Will, POTC: DMC

"I was nothing more than an almost innocent bystander..." -Jack, POTC: DMC

:skullbones:
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~Tutu45 Nov 9, 2004, 5:04:05 PM
Good God child! That was soooooooooooooo flangin' good! Why the heck are we all depressed about boys? We've really gotta get over that.

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"We can attack the mayor with humus" -Oz, Grad. 2
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~JillValentine44 Nov 9, 2004, 5:21:47 PM
Hehehe yeah, stupid us. Anyway, THANK YOU!!! That was so nice of you to say. ^ ^ But yeah, we are all crazy. ^ ^ THANKS AGAIN!! ^ ^

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:flirty:JillValentine44:flirty:

:skullbones:

"What about Jack?! I can't leave without him!" "ARRRGHHHHH!!" "...Never mind, let's go!" -Will, POTC: DMC

"I was nothing more than an almost innocent bystander..." -Jack, POTC: DMC

:skullbones:
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~jester81 Nov 18, 2004, 7:13:18 PM
Wow a pirate and a poet... lol. Very nice. I completely agree this is great. I'm... speechless...
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